'The Blues' Resort Dress

I used a vintage sewing pattern from the 1970s, Simplicity 8442, to create a resort style dress. There was an issue of a gapping neckline and I tried to contain the problem by taking in the shoulder seams. Any suggestions on how I can fix the issue when I use the pattern again is much appreciated.


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Thank you and have a great week!
Adey